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The Fall of Sin - Extended by Anton101 The Fall of Sin - Extended by Anton101
I improved the fluidity of the letters in this version and made it in poster form. Thought about replacing the original but decided against it.
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Critique by thestarsprism Apr 19, 2011, 10:36:18 PM
Of course, you have to direct me to your two best pieces as the ones to critique. :laughing: Your work is pretty consistent, however, and I could only find a few of your pieces which weren't really up to par.

I'll skip a lot of the good stuff because your comments have already covered that. I will say, however, that your color scheme is quite suitable for the theme, and that the concept is certainly suitable (however cliché it is). Typography -has- to be cliché every now and then.

The font below the design saying, "And the fall of sin..." is not easy enough to read- I don't know why. I just find that specific font to be a bit weird. Perhaps if it was a bit larger? Perhaps if it was a different font? Just remember that all of your fonts should be as easy as cake to read through.

I kind of find the effect done with "SIN" to have been a bit too subtle. If I was looking at this from a distance, I would perhaps mistake this as the word "SIN" with some letters below it. I would have gone a bit further and made the effect take off the foot of the N and a bit of the S.

Certainly, though, it's a tough balancing act between subtlety and significance, and you got it pretty close. I might be of dissenting opinion on where to draw the line.

I don't think it was appropriate to have the image so tall and skinny. I think that you should reserve the tall and skinny proportions for your sleek designs; this is not sleek. Your LGBT poster was much more sleek, and the proportions were much more appropriate for that particular piece. For this one, I would have gone with perhaps a square, or a rectangle at most. On that same note, the word "SIN" doesn't have enough room on either side.

Overall, great job. I really like it.
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JohanF26 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014
How long did it take you to make this poster?
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dcannon2010 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2012
I love it. I am writing a book titled Sin: Satan's tool of separation
It would be great for our cover. Wish you made that for me.
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imugno Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Student General Artist
how do you have placed the letters? not manually, right??
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:iconanton101:
Anton101 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yeah it was manual. Every single letter lol
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:iconoumaimaz:
oumaimaZ Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012
I really impressed by your work
I wonder if u can tell me how can i give this metal effect to the letters??
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:iconanton101:
Anton101 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks! :) I just used a combination of gradients and basic beveling effects in photoshop.
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:iconoumaimaz:
oumaimaZ Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012
I liked it so much ,great job ;)
I wonder if you can tell how can u give this effect of metal's letters ??? thxx :)
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:iconanton101:
Anton101 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thanks! I used the bevel effect in photoshop
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:iconanton101:
Anton101 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks! I used the bevel effect in photoshop
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misserinelizabeth Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2011  Professional Photographer
This is the best thing i have seen in a long time..absolutely stunning!
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:iconanton101:
Anton101 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Thank you! :)
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:icontheartistem:
theArtistEm Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2011  Student General Artist
This is awesome! It looks like you really put in some time here--your concept and technical skill are both strong and support each other. Nice work!
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:iconanton101:
Anton101 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Thank you! :) Glad you like it.
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zeeekay Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2011  Student Interface Designer
hey man do make tutorial of ur work i realy want to learn this all and em very much excited abut dis....do as early as possible...plzzzzz
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zeeekay Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011  Student Interface Designer
hey its awesomeeee whould u plz tel me how can i do this i want to know this typography....
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:iconanton101:
Anton101 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2011  Student Digital Artist
I used illustrator to get all the letters in and photoshop for all the effects after...maybe I should make a tutorial lol
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DancingKoalas Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awesome
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:iconanton101:
Anton101 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Thank you :D
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BiganDG Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2011  Professional Interface Designer
Great concept
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:iconanton101:
Anton101 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Thanks :)
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phristopher Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2011
wonderful!
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:iconanton101:
Anton101 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Thank you!
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phristopher Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2011
;)
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Focus1983 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2010
Amazing! i love it! :D, witch programs do you use to do this wonderful work?
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:iconanton101:
Anton101 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Thanks! I used Illustrator and Photoshop
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UEY-S Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2010  Professional General Artist
great work, i like how it's nicely packed and falls apart at the bottom.. skill wise, nicely done :)
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:iconanton101:
Anton101 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Thanks :)
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erikakochanski Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2010  Professional Writer
:heart: Featured in: Gifted: Vol. 3. xoxo
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:iconanton101:
Anton101 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Thank you so much :) I'm honored!
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:iconfire-tears:
Fire-Tears Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2010
Absolutely beautiful.
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:iconanton101:
Anton101 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Thanks you!
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:iconhallzaddict:
HallzAddict Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
if I may ask
what exactly is the background?
what is it made of??
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:iconanton101:
Anton101 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2010  Student Digital Artist
It's actually a plain black background with a gradient and a few filters and lighting effects combined.
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Janeski Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
Одлично изведено, имаш нерви :) за ц'цкање :)
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Michael137 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
Powerful!
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Michael137 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
Powerful!
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Arifismyname Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
your design featured here [link]
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:iconanton101:
Anton101 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Thank you! I'm honoured :)
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Arifismyname Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
u r welcome bro
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:iconlemmyk:
LemmyK Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2010
Awesome!
I wish I could do things like this :-/
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:iconanton101:
Anton101 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Anyone can really :) I thought I couldn't before as well. You have an awesome gallery by the way!
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NoraAlgalad Featured By Owner May 25, 2010
great
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:iconanton101:
Anton101 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Thanks :)
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bodiechan Featured By Owner May 23, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
This is pretty epic.
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:iconanton101:
Anton101 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Thank you! :)
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bodiechan Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! :la:
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rangga19 Featured By Owner May 19, 2010
wow love your work :love:
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:iconanton101:
Anton101 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2010  Student Digital Artist
So glad :D Thanks!
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Lukay7 Featured By Owner May 17, 2010   Digital Artist
Cool design!
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:iconanton101:
Anton101 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Thanks :)
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