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The Fall of Sin - Extended by Anton101 The Fall of Sin - Extended by Anton101
I improved the fluidity of the letters in this version and made it in poster form. Thought about replacing the original but decided against it.
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Critique by thestarsprism Apr 19, 2011, 10:36:18 PM
Of course, you have to direct me to your two best pieces as the ones to critique. :laughing: Your work is pretty consistent, however, and I could only find a few of your pieces which weren't really up to par.

I'll skip a lot of the good stuff because your comments have already covered that. I will say, however, that your color scheme is quite suitable for the theme, and that the concept is certainly suitable (however cliché it is). Typography -has- to be cliché every now and then.

The font below the design saying, "And the fall of sin..." is not easy enough to read- I don't know why. I just find that specific font to be a bit weird. Perhaps if it was a bit larger? Perhaps if it was a different font? Just remember that all of your fonts should be as easy as cake to read through.

I kind of find the effect done with "SIN" to have been a bit too subtle. If I was looking at this from a distance, I would perhaps mistake this as the word "SIN" with some letters below it. I would have gone a bit further and made the effect take off the foot of the N and a bit of the S.

Certainly, though, it's a tough balancing act between subtlety and significance, and you got it pretty close. I might be of dissenting opinion on where to draw the line.

I don't think it was appropriate to have the image so tall and skinny. I think that you should reserve the tall and skinny proportions for your sleek designs; this is not sleek. Your LGBT poster was much more sleek, and the proportions were much more appropriate for that particular piece. For this one, I would have gone with perhaps a square, or a rectangle at most. On that same note, the word "SIN" doesn't have enough room on either side.

Overall, great job. I really like it.
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dcannon2010 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2012
I love it. I am writing a book titled Sin: Satan's tool of separation
It would be great for our cover. Wish you made that for me.
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imugno Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Student General Artist
how do you have placed the letters? not manually, right??
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Anton101 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yeah it was manual. Every single letter lol
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oumaimaZ Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012
I really impressed by your work
I wonder if u can tell me how can i give this metal effect to the letters??
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Anton101 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks! :) I just used a combination of gradients and basic beveling effects in photoshop.
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oumaimaZ Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012
I liked it so much ,great job ;)
I wonder if you can tell how can u give this effect of metal's letters ??? thxx :)
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Anton101 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thanks! I used the bevel effect in photoshop
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Anton101 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks! I used the bevel effect in photoshop
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misserinelizabeth Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2011  Professional Photographer
This is the best thing i have seen in a long time..absolutely stunning!
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Anton101 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Thank you! :)
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